Sometimes writers get confused by the difference between
tense and voice. Hopefully this simplistic description will help: Tense is
about time (past, present, or future), while voice is about action (active or
passive). Our readers need context in order to understand when something is
happening and who is doing something or whom something is happening to.
Now to go past the simplistic. Within each verb tense there
are four more aspects to look at.
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PAST
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PRESENT
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FUTURE
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SIMPLE—action at a particular point of time or happens repeatedly
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I wrote yesterday.
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I write every other day.
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I will write tomorrow.
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CONTINUOUS—action takes place over a period of time
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I was writing when my agent
called.
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I am writing now.
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I will be writing tomorrow.
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PERFECT—action has already occurred, or will occur before another
action takes place
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I had written two short
stories.
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I have written several short
stories.
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I will have written a novel by
the end of the year.
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PERFECT CONTINUOUS—action is present has been occurring over time
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I had been writing for years
before being published.
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I have been writing for one
hour straight.
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I will have been writing all
day.
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Voice depends upon the subject of the sentence. If the
subject is acting, then the verb is active. If the subject isn’t acting, the
verb is passive. To find passive verbs, look for 1) the “to be” verbs and a
past particle of another verb (a past participle verb ends in “d”, “ed”, “n”,
“en”, or “t”), or 2) a combination of two verbs.
ACTIVE
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John wrote
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TO BE + PAST PARTICIPLE
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The story is being written by
John
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TWO VERB COMBINATION
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The writing was done by John
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Tense and voice need to match up so our story makes sense to
our audience. Thinking about when something occurred and what the subject had
to do with it will make our story clear. After all, we don’t want to confuse
our readers, otherwise we’ll lose them.
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